My View on Full-Time Employment versus Freelancing.

Nowadays it is undeniable that choosing what kind of job is one of the most popular topics in present-day world. Take my friend Wang as an example, who is a blogger on TikTok. He often remarks to me that freelancing really suits him, because he no longer has to get up early.

There are some points for account of my views. Firstly, as Wang says, freelancing gives people great freedom. You can work whenever you want. Besides, there won’t be any pressure from others. The other side is not far to seek. There are also many people who prefer full-time jobs, which is a stable choice. You don’t have to worry about the instability that freelancer might face. You just need to compete the daily tasks.

In my opinion, there is no correct answer to this question, it depends on you. Make your own choice based on whether you prefer more freedom or more stability. The right job is the correct answer for you.

作文评价：

这位同学的作文切题，结构完整，思路清晰，文字连贯。文章开头通过举例引出话题，中间段落分别阐述了全职工作和自由职业的不同特点，结尾给出了自己的观点，即选择取决于个人偏好。文章使用了一些基本的句型和表达，如“Take my friend Wang as an example”、“Firstly”、“Besides”等，使文章结构清晰，逻辑连贯。

扣分点：

1. 语法错误：在句子“There are some points for account of my views.”中，“for account of”应改为“to account for”。
2. 用词不当：在句子“You just need to compete the daily tasks.”中，“compete”应改为“complete”。
3. 题目格式：作文题目“My View on Full-Time Employment versus Freelancing.”没有使用正确的格式，应将题目放在单独一行，居中，并用《》号括起来。
4. 高级表达和复杂句型不足：文章整体语言较为简单，缺乏高级表达和复杂句型。

优化建议：

1. 修正语法错误和用词不当的地方。
2. 使用正确的题目格式。
3. 增加一些高级表达和复杂句型，如使用定语从句、状语从句等，使文章语言更加丰富和地道。
4. 可以增加一些具体的例子或数据来支持观点，使文章内容更加充实。

评分：20分（根据评分标准，作文切题，结构完整，思路较清晰，文字较连贯，但存在一些语法错误和用词不当，且题目格式不正确，因此评分为16-21分档中的较高分数）。