Garbage Classification

Nowadays, it is undeniable that garbage classification has almost become the most popular topic in present-day world, but there are still many people who do not have the habit of garbage classification. It will cause a lot of problems.

There are some reasons for account of my view. Firstly, if you don't have a good habit of garbage classification, a lot of things that can be reused will be wasted. For example, kitchen waste can be reused for use in the fields. Throwing them away is not only wasteful, but also affects our goal of achieving a green environment. Secondly, unsorted garbage will increase the burden on those who keep our streets clean, and sometimes even need them to do it.

In my opinion, as young people, we ought to do garbage classification and set a good example. And it contributes to sustainable development. We should promote its benefits and raise the awareness of garbage classification.

评分分析：

1. 切题性（22-30分）：

   • 作文紧扣“垃圾分类”主题，结构完整，分为三段：现状、问题、建议，符合题目要求。

2. 语言表达（22-30分）：

   • 语言表达基本通顺，但存在以下问题：

     • 语法错误：

       • “account of my view” → 应为“account of my views”。
       • “kitchen waste can be reused for use in the fields” → 表达冗余，可简化为“kitchen waste can be reused in fields”。
       • “those who keep our streets clean” → 缺少主语，应为“those who clean our streets”。

     • 中式英语：

       • “garbage classification has almost become the most popular topic in present-day world” → “almost”多余，可删去。
       • “garbage classification has almost become the most popular topic” → “popular”用词不够准确，建议改为“urgent”或“important”。
     • 逻辑连贯性：整体逻辑清晰，但部分句子衔接稍显生硬，如第二段开头“there are some reasons for account of my view”表达不够自然。

3. 句型与词汇（22-30分）：

   • 使用了一些复杂句型（如条件句“if you don't have a good habit...”），但句式较为基础，缺乏高级表达（如定语从句、强调句等）。
   • 词汇量有限，部分表达重复（如“garbage classification”多次出现）。

4. 额外扣分（1分）：

   • 作文题目未使用《》号或单独居中，需扣1分。

最终评分：26分（满分30分）

• 优点：作文切题，结构清晰，语言表达基本通顺，能较好地完成写作任务。

• 扣分点：

  • 语法错误（3分）：如“account of my view”“for use in the fields”等。
  • 用词不够精准（2分）：“popular”“almost”等词使用不当。
  • 题目格式问题（1分）：未使用《》号或单独居中。

优化建议（如何达到满分）：

1. 修正语法错误：

   • “account of my view” → “account of my views”。
   • “kitchen waste can be reused for use in the fields” → “kitchen waste can be reused in fields”。
   • “those who keep our streets clean” → “those who clean our streets”。

2. 提升语言表达：

   • 使用更精准的词汇，如将“popular”改为“urgent”或“important”。

   • 增加高级句型，例如：

     • 定语从句：“Garbage that is not sorted properly will harm the environment.”
     • 强调句：“It is garbage classification that helps us achieve sustainable development.”

3. 丰富内容与例子：

   • 增加具体例子，如“Plastic bottles can be recycled into new products, reducing waste in landfills.”

4. 格式调整：

   • 题目用《》号或单独居中，例如：

     Garbage Classification

通过以上修改，作文可以达到满分标准。

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